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Tragedy Row: I did what you told me

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The collison came so fast.
I saw the car, hit the break and now I'm laying on the cold asphalt. I hear screaming. I don't know if it's my own. 
She told me not to drink and I didn't. I were called fun killer but I didn't even nip.
So why I'm feeling so cold. Shouldn't I be home now? In my warm bed, underneath the blanket I got since I was ten.
Why am I alone? Why aren't you beside me, mom?
It is getting colder and colder and I'm so scared. What is happening? Am I dying? Is this my end?
I feel how tears roll down my face. I'm feeling so desperate. 
I'm not understanding why this is happening. I did nothing wrong. Then why I have to die.
I notice people coming to me, trying to talk to me but I can't move.
My body hurts. I'm feeling like a stone. I can't feel my legs. 
Why aren't you here? I need you. Mum, I don't want to die alone.
I see a doctor leaning over me. His eyes are calm, he is trying to help. I feel how he moves my arm. The pain is unbeliveable.
But as he touches my legs, I feel nothing.
It's getting colder. The pain becomes number. It is getting darker and lonelier. I just want someone to hold my hand.
I look around me and all I see is blood. It seems to be all mine.
I feel like I'm falling. The feeling of loneliness is gone. I'm feeling calm. The darkness seems overwhelming.

Zoey (18) died in a car crash. A drunken man drove on the wrong side of street and hit her car directly. While he came to the hospital and survived, Zoey died on the street. He is going to totally recover.
Zoey is leaving her mother and little sister behind.
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